jueves, 1 de diciembre de 2016

An opinion essay.
Divorce.
According to some people, divorce isn´t so bad, depending on the situation. I think that lots of people hate divorce, but if you aren´t happy in the relationship or you think that there is something that goes wrong, it´s the best idea.
For example, if in a relationship the man hits the woman or something like that, in this case, the woman must divorce quickly, because if she doesn´t do it, the man will hit her more and more and it will be worst.
On the other hand, the problem of divorce is children. A lot of relationship didn´t divorce because of the children, because some children are very young. But other couples get divorce when teir children are young and the feel so bad. Also, the childhood of those children will be very different, because is not the same to stay at home with your parents than to stay only with your father or mother.
To conclude, divorce could be good or bad, depending on teh situation. Some couples look more for their own than for the other people around them and they get wrong
So, to sum up, every couple can do what they want, but also, it´s depending on the situation. 

1 comentario:

  1. Be careful with:

    "a lot of relationship didn't divorce" = "a lot of relationships" (l.7) A relationship cannot GOT DIVORCED, just people.

    "get divorce" = "get divorced" (l.8)

    "teir" = "their" (l.8)

    "the" = "they" (l.9)

    "because is" = "because it is" (l.10)

    "teh" = "the" (l.12)

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